living inside

Image

this building I live in

has been torn by words,

and years of hurricanes

lashing through, battering

its strength with the wind

of not good enough.

buildings hear their weaknesses

and let pieces fall, begin

to believe they may crumble

under harsh weather

and perpetual judgment.

people pass by

older buildings

when the

outsides

crumble.

i live

inside.

13 comments to living inside

  1. prewitt1970 says:

    beautiful piece, beautiful thoughts, beautiful you

  2. PaulaB says:

    I’m with prewitt, beautiful

  3. This photo is don’t perfectly. The poem is gorgeous….so telling.
    Sarah, you’re quite the inspiration.

  4. raphaelcha says:

    Yea, but thou are firm because you are still standing inside and out.
    Great piece, continue on the firing line!
    Thank you for stopping by

  5. MyPoetryAndVerse says:

    I love your poetry. How do you get that effect in your photo?

  6. dmgartphoto says:

    Read this one yesterday and liked it. Today when I returned and read its even better. Great poem.

  7. jser67 says:

    This is great stuff!

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s