this building I live in
has been torn by words,
and years of hurricanes
lashing through, battering
its strength with the wind
of not good enough.
buildings hear their weaknesses
and let pieces fall, begin
to believe they may crumble
under harsh weather
and perpetual judgment.
people pass by
older buildings
when the
outsides
crumble.
i live
inside.

beautiful piece, beautiful thoughts, beautiful you
thank you, Benjamin, you are the sweetest
I’m with prewitt, beautiful
thank you very much
This photo is don’t perfectly. The poem is gorgeous….so telling.
Sarah, you’re quite the inspiration.
I appreciate your words more than you know!
Yea, but thou are firm because you are still standing inside and out.
Great piece, continue on the firing line!
Thank you for stopping by
Thank you very much.
I love your poetry. How do you get that effect in your photo?
Thanks for your kind words. I think I used PicMonkey on this one and overlaid it with concrete.
Read this one yesterday and liked it. Today when I returned and read its even better. Great poem.
Thank you so much for your kind words.
This is great stuff!